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I was walking alone on this creepy, dark road. It was deserted and no cars had pass through it after midnight. Suddenly, I felt that a dark figure was following me silently, I turned back to look, and I……

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Blogger Arthur Leow said...

I turned back to look, and I came face-to-face with a pale man. His skin was whiter than a freshly laundered sheet, and I could see myself reflected in the bottomless pits of his eyes. He was shaking violently, and it was easy to tell that he had been frightened very badly. But before I could open my mouth, he blurted out: "It's coming for me!"

It is evidently quite a scary story, as the darkness and loneliness are both indications of fear.

February 25, 2011 at 6:52 AM  
Blogger ChenHY97 said...

I turned back to look, and I saw that the dark figure was actually a girl wearing a white dress. Blood was strewn all over her dress and she said, "Come with me..." Feeling like throwing up, I ran away as quick as I could.

February 26, 2011 at 7:26 AM  
Blogger Hou Yi's BLOG said...

I turned back to look, and I saw a creature, a monster, 5 metres from the ground, uprising into the sky and gave a huge growl. Underneath was the cracking ground, revealing souls from hell. Each of them moan, groan and cried. Suddenly the monster gushed down, and I felt a gush of wind..... Horrified, I closed my eyes, waiting my death. But minutes later, when I opened my eyes, nothing happened, creepy enough, blood stains were on the floor.

The settings obviously show a creepy story, or interesting one. The usage of loneliness and dark, creepiness shows fear and haunt.

February 28, 2011 at 4:53 AM  

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